Friday, March 27, 2009

i need more stanzas... but i cant think.. any sugguestions??

all of your pictures,
all of your gifts,
are being thrown out the window,
i need to forget.
all of our memories,
all the words we exchanged,
are being forgotten,
i need lasting change.
all of the smiles and all of the stares,
im taking them back,
im doing what's fair.

1 comment:

  1. I'm not sure it needs more stanzas i like the way it is. But if you did want to extend it you could think about adding a stanza about how much stronger the speaker is now that he or she is getting this person out of their life

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